Show Don't Tell: Advanced Techniques
Go beyond basic writing advice and learn sophisticated techniques for showing emotion, action, and information through scene and subtext.
Beyond the Basics
Every writer has heard "show don't tell," but few understand how to apply it effectively. This isn't about avoiding all telling—it's about choosing when to show for maximum impact and how to make your showing techniques more sophisticated.
1. Emotional Showing
Instead of telling us a character is angry, show it through:
- Physical reactions: Clenched fists, tight jaw, rapid breathing
- Dialogue changes: Shorter sentences, sharper tone, word choice
- Actions: Slamming doors, aggressive movements
- Internal sensations: Heat rising, vision narrowing
- Thought patterns: Fragmented, repetitive, or racing thoughts
2. Character Traits Through Action
- Generosity: Character tips well, shares food, offers help
- Nervousness: Fidgeting, checking phone, avoiding eye contact
- Intelligence: Quick problem-solving, asking insightful questions
- Arrogance: Interrupting others, name-dropping, dismissive gestures
3. Setting as Character
Use environment to show rather than tell:
- Wealth: Details about furnishings, materials, maintenance
- Personality: Organized vs. cluttered spaces
- History: Wear patterns, repairs, accumulated objects
- Mood: Lighting, weather, seasonal elements
When to Tell
Sometimes telling is more effective than showing:
- Transitions: Moving between important scenes
- Background information: When context is needed quickly
- Pacing: To speed up or slow down narrative rhythm
- Emphasis: When direct statement has more impact
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